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Post by greenie on Mar 20, 2010 13:40:07 GMT 10
Title: Catacombs 11 Rating: PG Length: 137 Competitor: Sabine Round/Fight: 3/B Summary: Sabine’s been away, but now she’s back. Notes: I know that this series thing isn’t really directly related to the catacombs anymore, but it’d be even more confusing to change it. “Sabine?” “Goddess, you’ve grown.” “Sabine, it’s been three months.” Sabine’s eyebrows raised. “Three months?” “You missed my birthday.” Kel fought to keep the accusation off her face. Sabine blinked and floated down to her. “I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to. You know that time passes differently in the Peaceful Realms.” Kel nodded reluctantly, and Sabine went to lay a hand on her arm – and went right through her. She swore. “I forgot I was back to being ghosty again. Who came up with all these sarden rules for being a ghost anyway?” “The Black God, I think. You shouldn’t insult him.” “I suppose I shouldn’t.” She sighed. “Make me solid again please?” “Maybe I don’t feel like kissing you.” Sabine eyed her. “You’re sulking,” she said, sounding delighted. “I’m not!” “You are.” Sabine grinned. “You missed me.”
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Mar 20, 2010 13:44:12 GMT 10
Oooh, yay!
I specifically love: 1. that it's only been 3 months and Kel has grown noticeably, 2. that Kel actually is sulking, and 3. that Sabine sees this as delightful proof of how much Kel likes her.
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Post by greenie on Mar 20, 2010 13:49:03 GMT 10
Thanks! Also, a list! That's an awesome idea, I tend to end up giving rambly reviews.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Mar 20, 2010 14:59:24 GMT 10
Aw, but rambles are so very charming!
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Rowena
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back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on May 1, 2010 22:15:12 GMT 10
Love that Kel is upset with Sabine for missing her birthday, and that she's sort of being coy/playing hard to get with Sabine because she's just a little mad at her. Great job!
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