Minuit
Knight
Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on Feb 1, 2010 10:28:22 GMT 10
Title: Other lovers Rating: G Length: 144 Competitor: Wyldon Round/Fight: 1A Summary: Wyldon and Kel's relationship is compared to other lovers'.
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Other lovers stole kisses in dark corners. He was too honourable to steal anything of hers.
Other lovers danced all night in each other’s arms. He couldn’t spend all night in her arms for fear of spiteful gossips.
Other lovers wrote poems and love letters to one another. He wrote her orders and letters on strategy for battle and war.
Other lovers whispered in each other’s ears, telling all their secrets. He dared not whisper anything in her ear, never mind all his secrets.
Other lovers innocently flirted and gave their affections to many. He would whole heartedly devote his affections to her alone, if given the chance.
Other lovers were free to give their heart to whomever they chose. He, Lord Wyldon of Cavall, husband to Lady Vivenne of Cavall, was not free to give his heart to Lady Knight Keladry of Mindelan.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 1, 2010 10:31:48 GMT 10
Ouch! Now twist the knife the other way... (It's fabulous angst, though.)
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Post by journeycat on Feb 1, 2010 10:38:55 GMT 10
Oh, I was waiting for sad!Wyldon!fic You wrote it beautifully; I loved the format and the comparison.
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 1, 2010 10:43:14 GMT 10
Oh, poor Wyldon. Lovely fic.
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Kit
Squire
Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Feb 1, 2010 10:50:30 GMT 10
lovely fic--very nice structure!
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Post by wordy on Feb 1, 2010 11:18:44 GMT 10
Very sad and beautiful.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 1, 2010 11:53:19 GMT 10
Poor Wyldon!!
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