MinPin
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Cavall SmutMistress in training
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Post by MinPin on Feb 5, 2010 2:15:04 GMT 10
Title: Come, come girl Rating: R Length: 144 words Competitor: Wyldon Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: ;D
“Come, come girl. You swore obedience to your commanding officer.” “This is not what was intended.” “What is intended is at the discretion of your commanding officer. Me.” His nails raked her arms and his hot, moist breath blew on the back of her neck. She had goose bumps all over. He bent over her, bent her over, and her arguments were lost in nails, and teeth, and skin, and whispered words she knew he was too honorable to lie to her about. She might have screamed, but his mouth was on hers so she didn’t know. She was going out of her mind. It was going in all the heat and passion and love (because she knew he loved her) that overtook her common sense. And she lost her mind, when his lips pressed to her ear and he whispered “Come, come girl.”
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Post by Rosie on Feb 6, 2010 1:24:45 GMT 10
Wyldon in control = awesome!
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Post by Lisa on Feb 6, 2010 7:06:43 GMT 10
Last line = dead Lisa. Just so you know.
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