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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 15, 2010 16:42:04 GMT 10
Title: In Silence (VI) Rating: R Length: 125 words Competitor: Nealan of Queenscove Round/Fight: 1/C Summary: Every time is the same.
They make love in near-silence, mouths on each other's skin to muffle the small noises they can't help making.
“Neal,” Kel says, a world of desire in a whisper beside his ear. She heard him moaning about love often enough when they were pages (in a different context, admittedly), but she wants desperately to hear the real thing: to make him cry out, to hear the reactions that come naturally as he responds to her. She never has, and knows she never will.
Then his tongue curls around her nipple as his hand slides over her backside, and she forgets everything else. It's all she can do to stifle the cry of joy that comes from so far inside her.
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Kit
Squire
Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Feb 15, 2010 16:44:21 GMT 10
You are trying to kill me.
That was the perfect mix of hot (and god, it was hot) and funny. The deep desire to hear him was just...
Yes. You are going to kill me.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 15, 2010 16:46:54 GMT 10
*revives*
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Post by Lisa on Feb 15, 2010 23:00:11 GMT 10
Oh my God, you've killed me and sent me to smutty heaven. This is bliss, it really is.
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Feb 16, 2010 3:06:51 GMT 10
Still love it...sweet, hot and funny. Are there any more?
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 18, 2010 11:20:26 GMT 10
Thank you! (Obviously) this was the last one -- things would have gotten darker if I'd kept writing, and I just wasn't ready to go there.
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