Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Mar 13, 2010 4:23:05 GMT 10
Title: Nervous Rating: G Length: 165 words Competitor: Dom Round/Fight: 2/B Summary: Kel is making Dom so nervous! Inspired by the song “Right Moves” by Josh Ritter.
How could one woman have the power to make him so nervous? Not even a woman, yet. Still partly a girl, but you wouldn’t know it from the way Kel acted, or the way she looked. Gods, the way she looked—Dom wondered how far he would go for Kel. It killed him to see her with that oaf Cleon of Keenan—he sure didn’t appreciate Kel the way she deserved to be appreciated. Dom would have appreciated her—told her every day how beautiful she was, told her every day he loved her. Did he love her? He wasn’t sure. All he knew was that he had never felt this way before. So nervous all the time! He worried about what she would think of things he did, of what she thought about him. He worried about whether he made her nervous. Ridiculous, he told himself. This whole thing is ridiculous. But when she came walking toward him later, he was still nervous again.
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Post by jazzyjess on Mar 13, 2010 5:20:05 GMT 10
Aww I love the display of his nerves - it's a nice change after Dom being so smooth and unimpressionable all the time!
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Mar 13, 2010 8:44:55 GMT 10
Thank you
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domluvr
Squire
♥ Dom ♥
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Post by domluvr on Jul 15, 2010 14:24:18 GMT 10
Ohh I love this side of Dom! I love how it's written to show his frantic and confused thoughts. So adorable. I'm left wondering how I have not commented on some of these fics before! I must have read some SMACKDOWN fics when I was new to Glake and shy to contribute.
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Post by katieheidie on Jul 15, 2010 14:46:08 GMT 10
Wow, poor Dom. I love that nervous feeling.
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