opalgirl
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I also answer to Val.
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Post by opalgirl on Apr 20, 2010 9:58:07 GMT 10
Title: Motherless Children Rating: G Length: 155 words Summary: Giacinta Salmalin asks Onua about her assistants, the orphaned twins from Galla. Notes: Set within rainstormamaya's 'May You Live in Interesting Times' AU: Daine has a twin brother, Dren, and Numair has been replaced by his female equivalent, Giacinta. *** Giacinta frowned at the sight before her: Onua’s twin assistants, curled in separate bedrolls, yet so close to each other they might as well share one. “Twins,” Onua said quietly, as she poked at the fire. “Those children have been through more than what most adults could handle, would be my guess.” “The girl….” “Daine,” the K’mir supplied, nodding. “Daine. Does she ever speak?” Giacinta sat beside the twins’ employer, drawing her long legs close. Onua shrugged. “None too often, but she does. There’s not one thing wrong with her, as far as I can tell – but it is something more than being shy.” “So young Dren speaks for her?” “Mostly. He seems to know what she thinks." "Not unusual amongst twins—or so I understand. But Mithros, they both jump so." Onua smiled wryly and shook her head. "They've gotten better since we left Cria, Horse Lords know, but it makes me wonder, too."
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rainstormamaya
Soldier
Helps Kat get her Conte fix
~best known as May~
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Post by rainstormamaya on Apr 21, 2010 1:09:57 GMT 10
Eee, gorgeous! You have Daine & Dren's relationship down pat.
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Post by jazzyjess on Apr 21, 2010 3:11:38 GMT 10
Very interesting I like the relationship between Onua and Giacinta. Will you be continuing?
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Apr 21, 2010 10:31:42 GMT 10
I like this a lot! Daine and Dren seem very interesting.
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Post by Alliecat on Apr 22, 2010 9:58:48 GMT 10
This is fascinating...I can't wait to see more from you!
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