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Post by Seek on Sept 23, 2009 18:12:45 GMT 10
Title: Steel Rating (And Warnings): PG, because there's a bonus bit later that is. If you gutter. Word count: 42 words Summary: Joren learns that beneath Neal's silliness lies steel. Notes: AU, where Neal never became a knight.
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Joren thinks Neal is too soft and romantic, until he sees Neal turn away from the too badly wounded, and he learns that the ability to coldly judge and sentence a man to death needs more steel than the ability to kill.
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(naughty bonus, rated PG, if you gutter):
Joren also later learns that Neal's detachment as a healer isn't the only hard thing about him.
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Post by Rachy on Sept 23, 2009 18:38:37 GMT 10
And that must be the hardest thing for Neal to do (the first bit not the second bit). Lol. Bonus gutter moments
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Post by Verasque on Sept 23, 2009 18:49:21 GMT 10
Smoothly and realistically expressed. There was depth in that sentence alone. Kudos for the bonus sentence
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 23, 2009 20:29:16 GMT 10
Oh, I love this!! And the bonus sentence too ♥
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Post by theantichris on Sept 23, 2009 21:31:53 GMT 10
Ooh, fascinating AU. *admires* *then gutters*
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Minuit
Knight
Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on Sept 24, 2009 12:31:42 GMT 10
mmm Yummy fic
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Post by Seek on Sept 24, 2009 17:09:36 GMT 10
Heh, thanks guys! It's amazing how many guttered
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Post by queenscovegirl on Sept 27, 2009 10:32:32 GMT 10
LOL I loved the first sentence, and totally gutered the second! LOVES!
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