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Post by Verasque on Sept 22, 2009 14:57:54 GMT 10
Title: Rebirth Rating: G Words: 12 Summary: One moment changed his life.
The crown was placed onto Roald’s head, and suddenly, Jonathan was free.
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opalgirl
Sergeant
I also answer to Val.
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Post by opalgirl on Sept 22, 2009 14:59:22 GMT 10
Wow. That packs a punch. I like it.
(Tangent: I'm not sure when Roald would be crowned when Jon is still living - it could totally happen and this isn't necessarily criticism, just my own curiosity. /dork).
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Post by Verasque on Sept 22, 2009 15:03:03 GMT 10
Thanks! I'm in denial about Jon dying, so he abdicates in my world
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 22, 2009 15:04:35 GMT 10
Woah, nicely done! Poor Roald though, under all those chains.
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Minuit
Knight
Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on Sept 22, 2009 15:57:52 GMT 10
Whoohoo! Freedom! Very lovely fic. I think Jon&Thayet would take the first available opportunity to abdicate ... so they can run off and make mischief together
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Post by theantichris on Sept 22, 2009 16:59:36 GMT 10
Thanks! I'm in denial about Jon dying, so he abdicates in my world And then he and Duke G move to a retirement village for immortal nobles. Cool fic.
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Post by Seek on Sept 22, 2009 20:09:27 GMT 10
I love this; a different take on Jon's abdication and his sudden freedom from the burdens of the ruler. Well done!
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Post by Verasque on Sept 24, 2009 17:20:55 GMT 10
@ Isha: Yes, poor Roald. But wheeee! for Jon @ Minuit: Oh, they'll be running wild @ theantichris: LOL! They might bump into Myles there too by then. @ seekeraftertruth: Thank you! *blushes*
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Post by queenscovegirl on Sept 24, 2009 18:36:54 GMT 10
Poor Roald, oh well at least Jon is free...
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Post by Rachy on Sept 26, 2009 21:26:20 GMT 10
Lovely. Free Jon is a beautiful concept to think of, because you can see through his character that kingship has such a burden on him. And it's even more lovely to think of when you consider that Jon abdicating makes so much more sense, considering he's the Voice.
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Post by Lisa on Sept 27, 2009 2:21:08 GMT 10
I love how you see Jon, because I see him the same way, and it makes me very happy to read anything you write with him in it. ^__^
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Post by journeycat on Sept 27, 2009 2:29:17 GMT 10
Fantastic. It's so short, but there's so much to it.
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Post by Verasque on Oct 6, 2009 13:47:42 GMT 10
@ queenscovegirl: Yes, he is @ rachy: Thank you so much! It's so nice to see someone understanding it in the way it was intended. @ Lisafer: *blushes* Thank you! @ journeycat: Achieved my goal then. Thank you!
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