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Post by ubiquitous on Nov 16, 2010 14:31:24 GMT 10
Title: Vengeance Rating: PG Notes: Part of the 'Love is not Enough' drabble series. Summary: Vengeance is his, even if it is fleeting.
Wyldon sees the other man’s body on the ground, broken, and as their eyes meet, they both know that nothing can be done but to wait for the Black God. A flash of guilt tears through him, knowing that in a way, this is his fault. This man is dying because of him. Then he looks into those emerald green eyes, sees the hope and light fading, and the just as suddenly, the guilt is gone, replaced by satisfaction. For years he has dreamt of this, when he could return the pain the Duke of Queenscove has make him suffer, and years later, it has come, even if is but only a brief moment in comparison to his years of misery.
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Post by Alliecat on Nov 16, 2010 14:35:07 GMT 10
Ooh, this is incredibly powerful!
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Post by Elsceetaria on Nov 16, 2010 14:39:28 GMT 10
This is delightful!
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Post by ev on Nov 16, 2010 14:44:13 GMT 10
Whoa. This is so strong and amazing
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Post by ubiquitous on Nov 16, 2010 16:41:01 GMT 10
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it
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Post by Shhasow on Nov 16, 2010 18:28:03 GMT 10
Wow. Wyldon is a bit vindictive, isn't he? Great job.
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Post by max on Nov 16, 2010 20:15:19 GMT 10
For a story so small this packs one mother of a punch.
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Post by Ankhiale on Nov 16, 2010 21:06:19 GMT 10
^What Max said. Wow.
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Post by Cass on Nov 16, 2010 23:04:08 GMT 10
This is wonderful!
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Post by ubiquitous on Nov 17, 2010 9:55:42 GMT 10
Thank you!
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Post by Seek on Nov 17, 2010 20:11:15 GMT 10
Vengeance is mine, saith the Lord (Wyldon). I'm sorry Isha. It just popped in there
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Post by Ankhiale on Nov 17, 2010 21:20:21 GMT 10
LOL, seek.
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Post by ubiquitous on Nov 18, 2010 10:23:30 GMT 10
Lol!
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