purplepotatoblob
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'From now on I'm Alan of Trebond, the younger twin. I'll be a knight.' - Alanna
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Post by purplepotatoblob on Jul 27, 2021 13:04:26 GMT 10
Title: Destiny Rating: PG Word count: 100 Summary (and any Warnings): Neal, Kel, and Yuki arguing over Sakura of Queensove’s wish to begin page training:) Contains dramatic Neal content (I hope) Notes: So um I’m too lazy to post on fanfiction.net and um my ao3 account is only gonna be ready by this Friday heh so here we are with my random hundred-words thing. I’m really excited because it’s my first time posting hehe and I’d really appreciate it if you could um give feedback and stuff.
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“Page training’s too rough for her.” Neal’s eyes flashed.
“Nealan.” Yuki’s mouth turned down disapprovingly. “It’s what she’s wanted since she was six. Would you deny her that?”
“Yuki’s right.” Kel faced him. “ Irnai predicted it before you got married.”
“Did she predict that I would have an apoplectic fit?” The healer demanded. “ I don’t want to lose Sakura.”
“HaMinch is fair,” Kel argued. “And that’s what she was destined to be.”
Neal of Queenscove sighed. “Fine. Sakura will start page training in the fall.”
Kel grinned, “I thought so. I’ve told haMinch.”
Neal squawked. “You did what?”
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Heh exactly 100 words written in 5 minutes in art class excuse my poor young soul (mind you, I’m way younger than all these books BUT I’M NOT UNDERAGE)
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Post by mistrali on Jul 27, 2021 15:31:12 GMT 10
I like the dialogue here. Neal would be against it, for sure, and Kel would consider fairness!
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Post by devilinthedetails on Jul 28, 2021 0:16:35 GMT 10
Nice! My favorite part was Kel telling Neal that she'd already told haMinch about Sakura starting her page training, and also Neal squawking in response since that is so Neal!
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Post by Tamari on Jul 28, 2021 8:09:58 GMT 10
Dramatic Neal indeed! Loved Kel in this brief scene
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purplepotatoblob
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'From now on I'm Alan of Trebond, the younger twin. I'll be a knight.' - Alanna
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Post by purplepotatoblob on Jul 28, 2021 13:14:51 GMT 10
ehe thank you so much for commenting on this y'all! It's not the first time I've posted a tortall fic-ish thing but I'm really heartened... being thirteen does not make life easier when it comes to writing about Neal and basically any character older than me because I have NO EXPERIENCE whatsoever hehe so thank you very much! I'm trying to come up with more neal/yuki and kel/dom right now but I'm writing a fic about the third generation: lianokami especially thank you so much!
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Post by Rosie on Jul 28, 2021 22:41:12 GMT 10
Aha, I love the banter in here between them, and Kel knowing Neal better than he knows himself. True friendship!
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purplepotatoblob
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'From now on I'm Alan of Trebond, the younger twin. I'll be a knight.' - Alanna
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Post by purplepotatoblob on Jul 28, 2021 23:13:40 GMT 10
Aha, I love the banter in here between them, and Kel knowing Neal better than he knows himself. True friendship! Thank you Rosie! Sorry if I haven't replied to each of you individually- I just go with whatever appears on my screen T-T
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