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Post by mistrali on Oct 28, 2020 17:32:36 GMT 10
Title:Forest Words: 15 Rating: G Summary: The forest, above and below. Notes: I know fungi don’t really bubble, they sprout. Call it poetic licence Howler monkeys chitter overhead, invisible in the fog; on the jungle floor, fungi bubble sunward.
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Post by devilinthedetails on Oct 28, 2020 23:15:43 GMT 10
You really capture a great sense of place in this sentence. It shows how teeming with life and how changing the jungle is. I feel like I am in the jungle as I read it.
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Post by mistrali on Oct 29, 2020 5:50:39 GMT 10
Thanks!
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