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“Every now and then I like to do as I'm told, just to confuse people.”
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Post by Vala on Oct 26, 2018 13:56:56 GMT 10
Title: Peace Rating: PG Word Count: 33 Summary (and any Warnings): Dove reflects in the later years of her reign
Her people sung, the kudarung flew, and little Dove - not so small now - looked upon the country born from the blood of her people, a serene smile at last lighting upon her face.
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Post by devilinthedetails on Oct 26, 2018 21:31:50 GMT 10
I love the sense of peace but also of melancholy in this sentence, and that contrast between Dove's serenity and the violence it took to get her on the throne is very poignant.
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Post by Vala on Oct 29, 2018 11:10:10 GMT 10
I love the sense of peace but also of melancholy in this sentence, and that contrast between Dove's serenity and the violence it took to get her on the throne is very poignant. Ah thank you! I really tried to get across that.
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