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Post by Tamari on Aug 30, 2017 3:38:41 GMT 10
Series: Betrayal Title: What It Takes Rating: PG-13 Event: Sharp Shooting Words: 100 Summary: Alanna runs away from the aftermath, but Alex and Delia can’t.
After Roger dies, it’s like the gallows floor has fallen off beneath them, but their necks don’t snap.
What can they do, now that the man they placed their faith in is dead? Alex wants to forget; Delia wants to scheme. Her scheme involves flirting with Alanna’s brother. Alex isn’t courting Delia, officially, but he still doesn’t like it.
It’s all for Roger, she reminds him when his envy shows. The redheaded fool is just a means to an end. Alex is the only one who shares her bed.
Thom takes the bait. Delia takes a bow. Roger takes over.
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Post by Seek on Aug 30, 2017 6:54:40 GMT 10
Love this. Short, punchy, powerful. I love your Delia, too. You've definitely left her a sharp and calculating edge
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Post by Kypriotha on Aug 30, 2017 7:52:30 GMT 10
This is great - short but powerful. I really like your characterisation of Delia in this series. You've given her so much more depth than the books and I love it 😊
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Post by Hopeless on Aug 1, 2020 21:30:41 GMT 10
Series: Thom takes the bait. Delia takes a bow. Roger takes over. I love this line
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