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Post by Seek on Mar 12, 2015 20:04:10 GMT 10
Title: The Last Bazhir Rating: G Word Count: 18 words Summary (and any Warnings): The day Zahir dreads finally comes. Notes: None.
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He is old, now; pipesmoke drifting through empty tents, the campfires cooled to grey ash, waiting for rain.
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Post by mistrali on Mar 13, 2015 1:25:48 GMT 10
Oh, this is so evocative in so few words.
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Post by whimonda on Mar 13, 2015 8:45:25 GMT 10
This is breathtaking.
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