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Post by Seek on Jul 13, 2013 23:21:09 GMT 10
Title: Messages in a bottle Rating: PG-13 Prompt: Letters, (#49) Character/Couple/Theme: Mattes/Sabine Series: Caged Dog Summary: Letters across the years, some unsent. Notes: This is sort of a Mastiff AU. Therefore, spoilers for Mastiff. Kind of.
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Dear Sabine,
Thank you for the warm posset and the brazier. It’s looking to be the coldest winter in Corus that I can remember. My legs ache sometimes.
Yours, Mattes.
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Mattes, Keep warm. I am quite well. Lady Knight Sabine of Macayhill and Princehold.
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Dear Sabine,
The roses are dying. I think the cold’s killing them, though there’s not much a cove can do. I’ve been keeping them next to the brazier in the hopes they’ll survive. It ought to be warmer in the hill country.
Yours, Mattes.
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Mattes, I’ve left the hill country. Lady Knight Sabine of Macayhill and Princehold.
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Dear Sabine,
You were right. I should have asked you. I won’t ask for forgiveness. Child killers don’t deserve any.
Be happy.
Always yours, Mattes Tunstall.
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Post by max on Jul 14, 2013 10:37:39 GMT 10
I find a lot of letter fics get really overt and can come off quite heavy handed.
So I loved how you left emotion implied in these. It was not only realistic but also so effective, while at the same time remaining really delicate, and quite beautiful.
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Post by housewife on Aug 2, 2013 12:34:42 GMT 10
Mm, what Max said. Sabine's letters say a lot, in very few words. Mattes' break my heart.
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