hawksandfeathers
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by wordy
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Post by hawksandfeathers on May 4, 2013 8:07:41 GMT 10
Title: Purely Dialogue Rating: PG Summary: Neal and Yuki talk at a party. Word Count: 152 Pairing/Fight: R1 FD Neal/Yuki Notes: An experiment with pure dialogue.
"Neal, can you please pass me the cider?" "You like cider?" "Yes, I like it very much." "I just finished State of the Economy of Tortall and Other Lands yesterday." "Oh? You're interested in finance?" "Quite. I also like mints." "…" "Uh, why are we doing this, Yuki?" "You started it." "We're at a mages' party. There's better things to do than… lie to each other." "Wait, so you don't enjoy business books?" "If I could gag right now, I would." "But healers always like mints." "True, I can't deny that. But I can hardly believe you like cider." "If I could roll my eyes right now, I would." "Now we're copying each other?" "Maybe. There's a game in Yaman called Dragonflies. We try to link each comment to the next, or rephrase it in a different way. And it's nice." "Only…" "It's not the game to play with the man you love."
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Griff
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Post by Griff on Jun 3, 2013 15:23:49 GMT 10
I am both super lost and super amused right now.
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Muse
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Post by Muse on Jun 4, 2013 11:36:52 GMT 10
So, I started reading this going, "Oh, weird, awkward" and I didn't know why, even though I'd read the summary and got what you were doing, technically... ...and then as I read I figured out that *THEY* were super weird and awkward and it totally worked and it made me laugh! Nice job
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Post by ubiquitous on Jun 13, 2013 21:28:50 GMT 10
This is totally cute.
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hawksandfeathers
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by wordy
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Post by hawksandfeathers on Jun 14, 2013 4:49:57 GMT 10
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