SSSP: Solace, PG, (Quiet Affections)

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Series: Quiet Affections
Title: Solace
Rating: PG
Event: Single Sentence Shot Put
Words: 34
Summary: With her there is no need to pretend. Set sometime during the Scanran War.

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Tangled in Vivenne’s exhausted limbs - both overwhelmingly relieved that, after five months of separation, he is not yet carrion for Stormwings - the tension of battle drains away and Wyldon finally allows himself to weep.

[kiz]

I love that one sentence can hold so many different things. This is sexy, and a little funny, and then heartbreaking and sweet. Poor, stoic Wyldon!

[Griff]

Awww, Wyldon. *pets* We're all happy you're not carrion either. It wouldn't go with your shoes.

[Kypriotha]

Aww, what a lovely glimpse at their relationship! You've managed to convey so much in so few words. Well done!

[Rachy]

This is a lovely, expressive sentence, and you've conveyed the different stages really well!

[Lisa]

I have to agree with Kiz - this single sentence carries a tangle of emotions, and I love that you managed to be sexy and heart-crushing within 34 words. Gorgeous!

[Tamari]

You put so much in so few words. It's so sad and sweet at the same time (alliteration ftw!).