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Post by Deleted on Sept 18, 2011 15:26:26 GMT 10
Title: Space of One Moon Rating: G Word Count: 111 Card: Autumn Bingo: Wind + Moon + Change + Loss + Travel Summary: Her siblings are leaving.
Sandry's shoulder drooped slightly under her hand. Concerned, Lark looked very closely at the lines of her face, at pallor beneath her summer gold.
The smile on Sandry's face was gone, and her face was pinched as they watched Daja and Frostpine ride away.
"Lark," Sandry whispered. In her minute pause, Lark could hear bustle as Rosethorn and Briar, and Niko and Tris, packed. Sandry took a deep breath, and muttered, "I'm tired of change. I'm going to lose them all in the space of one moon."
Lark waited, but there was no sudden, soothing breeze around Sandry, and no one poked their heads out. Sandry was shielding from their thoughts.
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Post by wordy on Sept 19, 2011 18:50:23 GMT 10
Oh, this is beautiful and sad. Even in pirate.
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Post by Kris11 on Sept 20, 2011 12:07:06 GMT 10
I think the 'arrrrrrrrs' did go against the feel a tad but, but I loved the idea and thought you captured her feelings exactly. Great work!
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