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Post by donotstopthetides on Jul 2, 2011 4:30:15 GMT 10
Title: Studies Rating: G Prompt: Decathlon, 100 word Dash. Summary: Ozorne reflects on studying Arram. Note: Wooho, starting! Contructive criticism is treasured.
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He enjoys watching Arram study. There is a fierce expression of concentration gracing his friend's face that Ozorne loves, and the way the man's eyebrows furrow in concentration is just adorable. Actions like these that Arram preforms unconsciously strike a spot in Ozorne that he had not realized existed. A sweet aching emerges in that place whenever he finds himself near his friend, and it throbs in the most beautiful and painful way whenever habits such as those crop up . When Arram looks up (done with his studies, for now) his smile pierces that spot, seemingly designed just for him.
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Post by journeycat on Jul 2, 2011 4:32:35 GMT 10
I love that was get a chance to see Ozorne in this vulnerable, tender place, before he became this mad man. Lovely job!
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sidonie
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Post by sidonie on Jul 2, 2011 4:33:17 GMT 10
Wow, this was a lot sweeter than I was expecting, and I like it! Studious!Arram is very reminiscent of the Numair we know and love, and I can easily see Ozorne's infatuation turning to jealousy and anger.
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Kit
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Post by Kit on Jul 2, 2011 4:34:51 GMT 10
Mmmph. I've been really looking forward to reading these, and this does not disapoint! I'm entirely unused to, and charmed by, the urge to look at Ozorne and go, "Ah, bless."
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luinae
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Post by luinae on Jul 2, 2011 5:02:33 GMT 10
I love how you see Ozorne before he turned into a power hungry lunatic. It's refreshingly honest and human.
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Post by mistrali on Jun 7, 2013 8:49:31 GMT 10
Aw. This is such a sweet portrayal of what their friendship might've been like before the rift.
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