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Post by Lass on May 5, 2009 5:18:13 GMT 10
Title: Finger Food Rating: PG Prompt: Villain Category: 100 words Word count: 100 Summary: For the Goldenlake Drabble Tournament. Berenene is hungry.
The empress lounged against her sofa, a beautifully warm woman. She had chosen to wear her hair in traditional curls and coils. She shifted her weight slightly, the amber silk rustled softly.
Hmm...who shall be my next snack?
Her brown eyes were alert as she watched her courtiers, if they even deserved that title. More like over-dressed puppets. After all, their purpose was to bring her entertainment.
There.
Berenene lifted a slender hand and crooked a finger at the boy, for boy he would be until she tempered him.
You will do.
Her unsuspecting prey could not resist the empress.
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Post by anilaurel on May 5, 2009 10:14:47 GMT 10
This is wonderfully done. You hit her character wonderfully
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Post by Lass on May 5, 2009 10:17:59 GMT 10
Thank you.
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Post by clairshadows on May 6, 2009 8:16:21 GMT 10
This is how I see her relationship with her court. Wonderfully portrayed.
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Post by Lass on May 6, 2009 10:40:19 GMT 10
Thank you.
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Post by Fenella on May 6, 2009 11:30:47 GMT 10
You do a great lazily-smug evil!
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Post by Lass on May 6, 2009 11:31:39 GMT 10
She is such an evil slug. lol.
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Post by ubiquitous on May 6, 2009 23:35:37 GMT 10
Very nicely done!
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Post by Lass on May 7, 2009 14:46:16 GMT 10
Thank you.
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Post by Lisa on May 17, 2009 15:29:20 GMT 10
Oooh, delightfully wicked!
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Post by Katty on Jun 24, 2009 15:46:46 GMT 10
*fangirls*
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Post by Lass on Jun 28, 2009 11:06:36 GMT 10
*giggle* Katty, that made me really giggle.
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Post by ev on Jul 28, 2010 8:08:32 GMT 10
You perfectly made Berenene.
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Post by katieheidie on Jul 28, 2010 16:11:10 GMT 10
I adore this so much!
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