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Post by wordy on May 10, 2009 16:59:27 GMT 10
Title: Absence Rating: PG Prompt: Numbers Category: 100 word drabbles Word count:100 Summary: (Emelan) Dedicate Crane’s reflections on the Blue Pox and it’s after affects.
Number of components used to create the Blue Pox:
Five.
Number of keys required to unravel the Blue Pox and find a cure:
Thirty six.
Number of deaths:
Hundreds.
Number of deaths that haunt Isas Crane:
One.
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Something is wrong. The air inside the greenhouse is constricting, pushing against his every organ. His hands—which only days ago were steady—now tremble like sand shifting over an earth tremor. Cold sweat gathers on the back of his neck. Twelve times, Crane has turned to make an arrogant remark and sneer at his rival. And twelve times, she isn’t there.
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Mirage
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Post by Mirage on May 11, 2009 2:37:48 GMT 10
The last two lines are...haunting. And capture everything. Great drabble!
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anilaurel
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Post by anilaurel on May 11, 2009 6:18:05 GMT 10
Wow this is really good platonic RC
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Post by wordy on May 11, 2009 7:55:38 GMT 10
Thanks guys!
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Lass
Rider Trainee
Hey there!
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Post by Lass on May 11, 2009 7:59:07 GMT 10
Obsolutely adore it. I love lists, and how you had the numbers adding and such was just, great.
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Post by ubiquitous on May 12, 2009 22:48:21 GMT 10
I love this. Great drabble.
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Post by Lisa on May 17, 2009 15:31:22 GMT 10
::weeps:: OMG, lovelovelovelovelove this!!!
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Kit
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Post by Kit on Jan 31, 2010 15:01:01 GMT 10
*so. much. flailing* love this.
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Post by dragonbat on Jan 31, 2010 17:05:52 GMT 10
Brava!
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