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Post by opalgirl on Apr 14, 2009 12:36:08 GMT 10
Title: Laughing to Red Rating: PG Prompt: #1 - Color. Summary: How a flower-seller changes her name. Notes: In ItHotG, there is a flower seller referred to as 'Laughing Nell'. In LR, a girl called 'Red Nell' is mentioned. My mind decided they're the same person. And this is what came of it.
When the flower seller called Laughing Nell brought her sister to the Dancing Dove, the male patrons were interested. Nell would gladly sit as luck during cards or dice or sit on a knee, but she never claimed a man as her own. The sister was different - or so they could hope.
When asked, Nell would laugh - her sense of humor had earned 'plain' Nell her name - and say she wanted not for a man or babies. She would flirt, dance and drink, but not wed.
The night a bloody fight broke out, things changed. The blood that flowed, after she found her sister dead on the floor earned Laughing Nell a new name: Red.
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Post by Anaroriel on Apr 14, 2009 12:40:23 GMT 10
Wait, so did she kill her sister? No, she just found her sister and then got covered in her blood... Wow. That's intense. I honestly thought you were going somewhere else when I started reading, the phrase "Red Nell" made me think of the Scarlet Letter and so I thought you were going to make her into a whore or adulterer. But this was an interesting twist too.
Great work!
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Post by Katty on Apr 14, 2009 14:32:30 GMT 10
Oh wow. A great use of canon snippets. Very powerful!
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Post by opalgirl on Apr 14, 2009 14:49:12 GMT 10
Anaroriel: It's hard to be clear within the limits of a drabble and I'm out of practice with them. @kat: Thank you.
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Post by zbilja on Apr 14, 2009 15:41:41 GMT 10
Wow, this is brilliant! You titled it well, too - great!!
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Post by ubiquitous on Apr 14, 2009 16:49:11 GMT 10
Wonderfully done! Has a very nice flair to it too
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Post by samantha on Apr 15, 2009 9:47:37 GMT 10
I love the way you've sown those two pieces of information together. That was great.
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Post by Rojo on Apr 15, 2009 9:53:34 GMT 10
Ooh, I really like this! The way you presented it, explaining instead of showing, really fits in with what you did her.
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Post by opalgirl on Apr 16, 2009 7:29:38 GMT 10
Ooh, I really like this! The way you presented it, explaining instead of showing, really fits in with what you did her. Thanks, rojo. It presented itself to me this way - as if it was one of the Rogues of George's court telling the story; even though I know telling is generally considered bad in writing, it just happened this way.
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Post by Lisa on Apr 16, 2009 9:01:32 GMT 10
Oh, yay! I always assumed they were one in the same, too. (Though my Laughing/Red Nell was a communist...) Very well done!!
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