Muted, G (#1)

[Anaroriel]

A/N: It's been a LONG time since I've written fic, so any CC is greatly appreciated! Thanks.

Title: Muted
Rating: G
Prompt: 1, Color
Summary: Alanna waits for George in the rain

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Crystal sheets of rain hung from the sky as Alanna waited in the muddy brown streets. She hugged herself against the cold, furious that George was making her wait for the letter from her brother.

“I should go give him a piece of my mind,” Alanna thought as a cart went by and splashed her with mud, making her melt into the murky, colorless world she was standing in.

George was suddenly before her, eyes hazel and alive. The letter
was white parchment, unaffected by the stains of life. There was a red seal, bright as her hair, which seemed to glow like a candle in the shadows of the street.

Then George was gone, as quickly as he came, and the colors streamed in his wake until they too, were muted by the world.

[Mirage]

He brightens her world...-chorus of awhs-
Of course, it is dark and dreary now that he's gone ;P
Very nice, and I very much like the title (<-weird?)

[Anaroriel]

Lol, I didn't say it wasn't cliched.

Like I said, I haven't written fanfic in a while, and I've gotten out of practice.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[Mirage]

Ahem..apparently I can't word compliments right - really, that was a very sincere chorus of awhs.

[Anaroriel]

Lol, it's fine. Thanks again. ^^

[ubiquitous]

Ver nicely done, and a good use of the prompt.

[Lisa]

This was such a tiny sweet little morsel of the entire Alanna/George spectrum.

There really needs to be more A/G ficcage out there - all the passion gets put in other pairings, it seems.

[Anaroriel]

Isha: Thank you!

Lisa: Thanks! And I agree, there needs to be more A/G love out there. ^^