aurorax
Queen's Rider
Captain Crazy
Drabbling Away!
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Post by aurorax on Nov 30, 2009 17:52:15 GMT 10
Title: Storybook Rating: PG Prompt: #14, Happily Ever After Summary: Thayet watches Buri break, and wishes fairytales weren't only for princesses.
“C’mon Thayet, let’s go on an adventure. You’re supposed to be a princess, like in the books. We have to find your fairytale.” The memory hit her suddenly, rising unbidden from a half-forgotten time. It felt comfortable, like the worn fit of an old sweater- these were better days, happier days, when she was still unnoticed by the world- but there was something unsettling lying just beneath the surface, leaving a bad taste in her mouth. Even as a child, Buri had known that not everyone could afford a happily ever after.
Her hand paused lightly on the door handle as she listened for any break in the silence before easing her way into the room. Thayet had never seen Buri cry before; her presence now would bring no comfort, only shame. She had barely recognized her fierce, proud friend in the woman who had rushed passed her without a word, her clothing torn and her eyes stained with tears. Gazing down at her friend’s sleeping form, Thayet wished that men who killed giants could love warriors instead of princesses, and that just this once, the fairytales could be wrong.
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Post by ubiquitous on Nov 30, 2009 20:19:38 GMT 10
Aww. So sweet and sad, I love it!
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Post by Lisa on Dec 1, 2009 0:32:30 GMT 10
Oh, I imagine it must be a shock to see someone like Buri cry. I feel so sorry for both of them!
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Post by greenie on Dec 1, 2009 7:40:51 GMT 10
Aww, poor Buri. You write this so well, and I especially liked the way you pointed out that if Thayet tried to comfort her, Buri would only feel ashamed that she'd seen her crying.
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Post by wordy on Dec 1, 2009 9:16:37 GMT 10
Awww Great fic!
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aurorax
Queen's Rider
Captain Crazy
Drabbling Away!
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Post by aurorax on Dec 15, 2009 11:19:27 GMT 10
Thanks everyone! It's always been part of my personal canon that there was a Buri and Raoul part one right around the end of LR that ended badly when Buri thought Raoul was really in love with Thayet.
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Post by Katty on Dec 16, 2009 21:08:25 GMT 10
Sad but lovely.
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