rainstormamaya
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Post by rainstormamaya on Apr 4, 2009 8:20:15 GMT 10
Title: Just There Rating: PG-13 Prompt: 2, Haunting Summary: Vania of Conté on a night when the ghosts catch up with her.
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Vania is twenty-six, tough, smart, pretty and young: she has everything she could ever want, including her own command. Sometimes poems are written to her, and extravagant compliments are paid to her, but their authors don’t know about the long scar across her back, or that she has soaked her uniform with blood and fought in close quarters, her ears full of screams and explosions, seen comrades die and killed in the name of mercy.
It is on nights like this, the still, cloudless ones, that Vania remembers everyone she has lost. Some of the Riders who knew her as a child. Family- her brother Liam, killed in battle, her father, dead from a heart attack, Great-Uncle Gareth from simple old age. Some of her own Rider Group, and some she barely knew but who died fighting beside her. Their ghosts surround her as she sits in the silent palace gardens, too far from the party to hear more than a dim, muffled clamour of music and chatter.
They don’t accuse, they don’t judge; mostly, they don’t say anything at all. Once, she thought her father kissed her cheek, and there was one time before a battle when she thought that Liam stood at her shoulder, a hand on the pommel of his sword- but mostly they are just there.
Vania does not know whether she is comforted or not.
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Post by Katty on Apr 4, 2009 16:46:34 GMT 10
Poor Vania... so much loss and yet she's stayed so strong. I love it, May. Great work.
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Post by ubiquitous on Apr 4, 2009 16:56:37 GMT 10
Wonderful fic! I love the resilience you put in her.
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Post by Lisa on Apr 4, 2009 22:37:27 GMT 10
We seem to be developing a lot in Vania here at Goldenlake. : ) I like that!
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rainstormamaya
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Post by rainstormamaya on Apr 5, 2009 8:43:09 GMT 10
Thank you Kat, Isha, and Lisa!
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Post by k4writer02 on Apr 6, 2009 4:31:30 GMT 10
Wow--this Vania is a heroine, in the tradition of Pierce's heroines. She loves, she loses, she perseveres. She suffers, but she gives to a cause larger than herself. It's a small space to make me understand so much about her, so kudos. And Liam's fate made me sad. But wow.
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rainstormamaya
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Post by rainstormamaya on Apr 7, 2009 8:27:03 GMT 10
Thank you for the lovely comment!
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Post by zbilja on Apr 13, 2009 17:31:23 GMT 10
Oohh.. *shudders*
Very, very creepy!
And best of all, I think it's my favourite #2 drabble yet!
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Kit
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Post by Kit on Apr 13, 2009 20:01:17 GMT 10
Beautifully written and very visual. Lovely answer for the prompt.
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Post by Anaroriel on Apr 14, 2009 4:40:20 GMT 10
Ooh, I love it. It's very beautifully written, great work. Poor Vania.
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Post by Hopeless on Nov 2, 2020 0:00:20 GMT 10
I love how vania reacts to all that sadness 😔 and liam’s fate makes me so sad! 😢
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