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Kel/Lalasa. I will go down with this ship.
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Post by EymberFyire on Feb 17, 2010 18:51:09 GMT 10
Title: Curiosity Rating: PG Length: 354 Competitor: Lalasa Round/Fight: 1/F Summary: Curiosity can be a powerful thing.
Three bells past noon on a summer’s day mean quiet and relaxation for the servants of House Mindelan. It is the hottest part of the afternoon. Even the insects move as if addled by poppy, and the family is resting indoors to avoid the sun. Unneeded for at least a few hours, those that serve the family are free to do as they please.
Tian wanders the grounds of the house, and she wonders why she is out in this damn fool’s weather. If she thinks about it she knows the answer, but right now she doesn’t quite want to think about it. It will make her feel even stupider than she is already acting.
To say all the family is resting is an exaggeration, and Tian knows this. In fact, a certain mad girl-page is almost guaranteed to be practicing with the family’s master-of-arms at this moment, which means a certain maid to that same girl will be up in the balcony, quietly watching.
Tian understands Keladry, for all that she thinks her a fool for wanting to get hit with blunt objects all day. What she doesn’t understand is this dark, beautiful girl that watches her so intently. Lalasa is a curiosity – a puzzle. Tian thinks perhaps it is one she has solved. As she watches Lalasa watch Keladry, she realizes with rueful good humor that she is about to find out one way or another.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 18, 2010 15:16:05 GMT 10
My god, you were a MACHINE last night, weren't you? And it's all so *good*!!
This is fantastic!
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Post by EymberFyire on Feb 18, 2010 19:36:05 GMT 10
My god, you were a MACHINE last night, weren't you? And it's all so *good*!! This is fantastic! I have a secret... I thought I had one extra day to the competition. When I realized I didn't, I sort of panicked and began frantically writing all of the fics I had planned out. I'm really glad you like it though! I wrote this one with you in mind. Also - thank you so much for reviewing everything. You're amazing, and it's really nice of you to do so. <3
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Post by Lisa on Feb 18, 2010 23:04:34 GMT 10
It's the least I can do to support my team! And it's easy, when the stories are so good. <3
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