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Kel/Lalasa. I will go down with this ship.
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Post by EymberFyire on Feb 17, 2010 18:50:28 GMT 10
Title: Cool - #2 Rating: PG Length: 109 Competitor: Lalasa Round/Fight: 1/F Summary: 1sentence word #2 - Cool
Lalasa’s observations of Keladry of Mindelan do not prepare her for the actuality of meeting the girl. She has watched from afar for almost a year, glancing around corners as the pages leave their classrooms, or gathering with the crowd of servants that chuckle at them on the practice courts.
Distance has allowed her a certain degree of freedom in imagining what the girl is like. When she is face to face with the reality of those level hazel eyes Lalasa finds she can barely speak. They are calculating, and cool, and completely unreadable, and Lalasa finds she has no idea what to expect from the next three years.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 18, 2010 15:15:00 GMT 10
Aha!! I love that you put all these words together to show Kel's impassiveness without using the word "mask". ;D Divine!
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