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Post by PeroxidePirate on Mar 7, 2010 1:37:02 GMT 10
Title: Charm 1 Rating: PG-13 Length: 129 words Competitor: Buriram Tourakom Round/Fight: 2/D Summary: Buri notices something amiss.
I leaned back on the bed, this time content just to watch, when something caught my eye. “Kel,” I said, “where's your pregnancy charm?”
“What!?” exclaimed two voices, as two rather large, solidly muscled bodies attempted to come to a sudden halt in the act of – well, you know.
Kel disengaged herself and sat up, hand reaching for the slim silver chain that should have been around her neck, and finding nothing. She let loose a string of curses she must have learned from... me, come to think of it... and began to hunt for the missing item.
Raoul cast me a plaintive glance, but I just shrugged. Kel would find the charm in a minute, most likely, and it wouldn't hurt him to wait.
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Post by Lisa on Mar 7, 2010 14:52:38 GMT 10
I love the subtlety of your words: "this time content to just watch", Raoul's plaintive glance. You tell a lovely story without overdoing it, and upon rereading it has more and more depth. <3
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Mar 8, 2010 0:24:12 GMT 10
Aw, thank you!
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