Rowena
Training Master
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Post by Rowena on Feb 8, 2010 6:27:21 GMT 10
Title: Taking Chances Rating: PG13 Length: 211 words Competitor: Yuki Round/Fight: 1/B Summary: Yuki convinces Kel that they’re always taking chances.
Yuki slipped out of Kel’s bedroom, whispering “Is he gone yet?” Kel nodded. “Yuki, that was too close!” The Yamani shrugged. “We were not in any danger.” “Yuki…” Kel groaned. “We were here, and we barely heard Neal knock on the door! He could have walked right in!” “But he didn’t,” she pointed out. “But he could have!” Kel argued, throwing her hands up. “What would we have done then?” Yuki took Kel’s hands carefully. “We would explain.” “It would crush him,” Kel looked down at their twined fingers, Yuki’s long and slim, her own covered in scars. “If Neal or Dom ever find out about this, it will crush them. They can never know.” She pulled away, crossing to the other side of the room. “Why are we doing this?” she cried. “You know why,” Yuki said gently, touching the other woman’s shoulder. “Tell me you’d have it any other way.” The Lady Knight was silent. “Kel, I love you.” Yuki whispered. “I know, Yuki.” Kel sighed. “I love you too. But I do care about Neal, and Dom, and if they find out—” Yuki cut her off with a hand over her mouth. “Kel, we’re always taking chances. And I know you wouldn’t have it any other way.”
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 8, 2010 6:58:26 GMT 10
Ooh, very interesting! And probably more realistic than the Kel/Yuki/Neal OT3 that always comes out when I try to write this pairing...
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Post by greenie on Feb 8, 2010 9:43:05 GMT 10
Ooh, nicely done!
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Rowena
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Post by Rowena on Feb 8, 2010 10:09:28 GMT 10
Thank you
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Post by Verasque on Feb 8, 2010 15:13:39 GMT 10
“If Neal or Dom ever find out about this, it will crush them. They can never know.”I like the forbidden tone that comes through here. Keep it going
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Rowena
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Post by Rowena on Feb 9, 2010 6:44:25 GMT 10
Thanks, Joa-I might write a few more, in between finishing my science
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Post by queenscovegirl on Mar 10, 2010 20:29:00 GMT 10
Very nice, forbidden romance is always fun ^^
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Rowena
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Post by Rowena on Apr 4, 2010 3:11:42 GMT 10
Thanks
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