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Post by Lisa on Feb 11, 2010 11:06:40 GMT 10
Title: Missing the Clues Rating: G Length: 113 Competitor: Yuki Round/Fight: 1/G Summary: Kel misses the not-so-obvious.
“It’s not always simple, loving an Easterner.”
Kel’s smile was tight. “I can only imagine.”
“There’s no subtlety. One has to practically force herself on her love, so her affection would be noticed.” Yuki sighed and sat next to Kel on the stone garden bench.
Kel shook her head, confused, as she scooted over to give her friend more room. “But – you never had to throw yourself at Neal.”
“Perhaps I’m not speaking of him,” Yuki said, her voice low. She slid closer to Kel and brought up her fan. Holding it up so others in the garden would not read her lips, she whispered into her friend’s ear. “I’m speaking of you.”
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 11, 2010 11:13:25 GMT 10
Oh, this is lovely!! ♥ I love the first line, it's so very Yuki. And I think Yuki needs to knock some sense in her with that fan though. Or kiss her senseless.
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Post by greenie on Feb 11, 2010 11:27:55 GMT 10
Hee, thick!Kel is amusing, and I love the way you have Yuki using the fan.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 11, 2010 11:33:59 GMT 10
Aw, I like this a lot!
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Post by journeycat on Feb 11, 2010 11:57:29 GMT 10
I love this! It's so simple and subtle and very Yuki-ish.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 11, 2010 14:17:00 GMT 10
Thanks, guys!! I'm glad you like it!
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Post by queenscovegirl on Mar 10, 2010 20:19:29 GMT 10
Hehe Kel can be rather dense when it comes to maters of the heart.
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Post by Rowena on Apr 23, 2010 9:42:35 GMT 10
Very cute Kel's oblviousness is great. Good job!
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