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Post by greenie on Feb 11, 2010 15:11:17 GMT 10
Title: Competition Rating: PG-13 Length: 260 Competitor: Sabine Round/Fight: 1/G Summary: Sabine shows her competitive side. Notes: Thanks to Joa for looking over it for me. “I’m older, I’ve been doing it longer than you. I have more experience.” “That doesn’t mean you’re better.” “I can prove it.” “I’ve been told I’m good too.” “No need to get cocky about it.” “I was just saying…and you were getting cocky too.” Sabine eyed her, a smile playing over her lips. “You’ll have to prove it now. First to get the other one off wins.” Kel smiled. “Alright, then.” Sabine gave her a crooked grin. “I’ll even be nice and let you choose which way you want to start off.” Kel thought and then pointed, and Sabine smirked before she got herself into position. ….. At first, Sabine’s force shocked her; it felt as though she was trying to completely impale her. Then Kel grinned to herself. Of course Sabine would be competitive about something like this. Kel relaxed momentarily and shifted a little, feeling the strange but familiar muscles moving beneath her. She felt herself getting used to the pattern as Sabine tried again and again – and then she knew right before it happened that it was too late to stop herself. The next thing she knew, she was flying – dizzy and flying, soaring and out of control - and coming down again with a thud. She lay there panting for a moment and then looked up to see Sabine standing over her; wiping her face on her sleeve and offering Kel her other hand. “I told you I was better at jousting,” she told Kel, and she grinned. “Now…I’m thinking that you owe me a reward.”
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 11, 2010 15:19:05 GMT 10
*dies*
You wrote this perfectly. I wasn't sure until the very last line.
*still dead*
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Post by greenie on Feb 11, 2010 17:53:05 GMT 10
*revives*
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on May 1, 2010 22:09:34 GMT 10
Woah...I wasn't sure until the last line either Good job!
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