Post by Moony on Feb 17, 2010 9:19:08 GMT 10
Title: Discoveries
Rating: PG
Length: 300 words
Competitor: Neal
Round/Fight: 1/C
Summary:Neal's reaction when he first learns of Dom and Kel.
Neal was hungry and confused. This, by itself, was not unusual, but the cause was. Kel had not been in the mess, nor had anyone seen her in her pre-dawn training. So Neal was (understandably) worried.
He Trudged back up the stairs he trying to convince himself not only that she was fine, but that his concern was simply as a friend. Knocking on the door though, he got no response, so he knocked harder.
"No, no I have to answer it." The fact that Kel was talking to someone was worrying, the fact that the responding murmur was male was even more so. "It could be an emergency, though. I promise if it's not I'll be right back. Where did that go...Who is it?"
"It's me"
She opened the door in her breast band and loincloth, a sheet around her shoulders. It was not the first time he had seen her dressed as such, but he still had to convince himself not to stare. Every time he saw her in any state of undress he could only think of her broad shoulders, tight stomach and firm skin, and how it would be to touch and kiss it. "I was just wondering why you weren’t at break..fast." Now that he had torn his eyes from her, though, he could see the reason. His cousin lay beneath her blankets, a smile on his lips. The bastard waved.
"I'll be down for lunch, ok?" even while his stomach was on the floor he couldn't help but notice how adorable her blush was as she shut her door.
"I still think I haven't shown you how happy I am to see you." Dom. Anyone but Dom. But Neal scurried away to lick his wounds in peace and avoid hearing more of the reunion.
Rating: PG
Length: 300 words
Competitor: Neal
Round/Fight: 1/C
Summary:Neal's reaction when he first learns of Dom and Kel.
Neal was hungry and confused. This, by itself, was not unusual, but the cause was. Kel had not been in the mess, nor had anyone seen her in her pre-dawn training. So Neal was (understandably) worried.
He Trudged back up the stairs he trying to convince himself not only that she was fine, but that his concern was simply as a friend. Knocking on the door though, he got no response, so he knocked harder.
"No, no I have to answer it." The fact that Kel was talking to someone was worrying, the fact that the responding murmur was male was even more so. "It could be an emergency, though. I promise if it's not I'll be right back. Where did that go...Who is it?"
"It's me"
She opened the door in her breast band and loincloth, a sheet around her shoulders. It was not the first time he had seen her dressed as such, but he still had to convince himself not to stare. Every time he saw her in any state of undress he could only think of her broad shoulders, tight stomach and firm skin, and how it would be to touch and kiss it. "I was just wondering why you weren’t at break..fast." Now that he had torn his eyes from her, though, he could see the reason. His cousin lay beneath her blankets, a smile on his lips. The bastard waved.
"I'll be down for lunch, ok?" even while his stomach was on the floor he couldn't help but notice how adorable her blush was as she shut her door.
"I still think I haven't shown you how happy I am to see you." Dom. Anyone but Dom. But Neal scurried away to lick his wounds in peace and avoid hearing more of the reunion.