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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 15, 2010 16:39:27 GMT 10
Title: A Good Place (V) Rating: PG-13 Length: 130 words Competitor: Nealan of Queenscove Round/Fight: 1/C Summary: Picks up where "Not Simple" leaves off.
Kel pushes the door shut, toes off her boots, and begins to unlace her tunic before movement draws her attention toward her bed.
“Neal!”
By the light of her candle, she can just see his face as he stands. She should tell him to leave, or at least ask him what he's doing here. Instead she takes a step forward.
They meet in the middle of the room, picking up exactly where they left off in the guard tower. This time his hands are strong and supple on her waist, and it's easy for her to reach under his tunic and feel the warm skin of his back.
“Is this a good place?” he asks, between kisses. “For undressing?”
She tugs his shirt over his head. “What do you think?”
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Kit
Squire
Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Feb 15, 2010 16:42:10 GMT 10
Vivid and warm and I could practically feel that, her hand on his back. You are wonderful.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 15, 2010 22:58:31 GMT 10
I'm happy that she's not overthinking it. *is delighted with this series*
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
Posts: 2,661
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Post by Rowena on Feb 16, 2010 2:54:31 GMT 10
I agree with Lisa! This is so good, I have to go read more...
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 18, 2010 11:20:41 GMT 10
Thanks!
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