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Post by Lisa on Feb 22, 2010 14:17:13 GMT 10
Title: Feel Me Rating: PG Length: 128 words Competitor: Baird Round/Fight: 1/D Summary: The first kiss surprises Kel.
The first time we kiss, there is no hesitation. He does not warn me with a wish for winter luck, or a cheeky declaration of what he’s about to do. There is no long gaze into each other’s eyes as we dare the other person to make the first move.
He simply pulls me into his arms and kisses me, his lips coaxing and teasing while my heart thumps madly. It would be a lie to say that I hadn’t thought of it before. (I admit, I’ve imagined kissing quite a few of my comrades over the years.) But at the same time, I hadn’t expected him to lay siege to my every defense, feeling for every nuance of who I am within one whirlwind of a kiss.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 22, 2010 14:19:37 GMT 10
I love it when Kel's surprised!
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Post by Lisa on Feb 22, 2010 14:20:23 GMT 10
Me too!!
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Post by jazzyjess on Feb 22, 2010 14:54:26 GMT 10
Very beautiful and descriptive language you're using here. Though I would certainly appreciate a fic in which one of the two are in true Tommy-style, all deaf, dumb, and blind?
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Post by Lisa on Feb 22, 2010 14:57:20 GMT 10
HAHAHAHAHA! I was trying to work the mention of pinball into it, but it wasn't working...
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 22, 2010 21:38:03 GMT 10
Lovely fic! I adore the descriptiveness, and surprised!Kel is way cool
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Post by Lisa on Feb 22, 2010 23:11:42 GMT 10
Thanks, Isha!
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