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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 3, 2010 12:28:42 GMT 10
Title: The First Time Rating: PG-13 Length: 134 words Competitor: Wyldon Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: Their first time together. Part of the 'New Hope Proxy' drabble series.
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The first time, Wyldon had just lost Heart, and Kel had found him standing in the rain. He never cried, for all his grief, but he took solace in the warmth she offered as she took him back to his quarters. Kel wasn't sure if he knew the enormity of what he was doing, but he didn't seem to care about anything except the feel of her against him. Her kisses were the only light in the darkness of his pain, and he held on for dear life.
What she was doing was wrong, she knew that. But she didn't care, revelling in the feel of his smooth muscles under her skin. Maybe she was being greedy, but she wanted him, had wanted him for so long, and now he wanted, needed, her. She couldn't let him go now.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 3, 2010 12:32:25 GMT 10
"Wyldon had just lost Heart" is perhaps the most delightfully loaded sentence I've ever seen you write. This is gorgeous, and we need more!
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 3, 2010 13:16:26 GMT 10
Hee, thanks!
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Post by journeycat on Feb 3, 2010 13:57:42 GMT 10
Mmm I just love so much about this! Like how Kel knew she was taking advantage of him, but she couldn't help herself - it's an interesting aspect of her!
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 3, 2010 16:14:21 GMT 10
Thank you!!
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Post by Rosie on Feb 3, 2010 19:23:20 GMT 10
I also love Kel's awareness! Great edge to this.
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Post by Kit on Feb 3, 2010 19:43:40 GMT 10
Just beautiful. Such a lot in so few lines.
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Post by ubiquitous on Feb 25, 2010 14:35:56 GMT 10
Thank you
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