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Post by Lisa on Mar 31, 2010 20:42:51 GMT 10
Title: Things You Fix Rating: G Length: 106 words Competitor: Owen Round/Fight: Final Summary: Kel’s daughter can see that her mother needs help…
On Renya’s sixth birthday, her favorite brother-in-law visits. She can’t help but think how much happier the world is when he’s in the house. Her Mama gets playful, and she gets to try fun an interesting games. And since it’s her birthday, the cook makes an enormous cake for everyone.
Owen likes to go riding with her, and he takes her swimming a lot. They have a jolly time, but she knows that when he leaves, Mama will be sad. And then she’ll go away on border patrol, or root out local problems that she can fix.
Letting Owen fix the problems is never an option.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Apr 1, 2010 21:05:03 GMT 10
Oh, so sad but sweet.
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Post by journeycat on Apr 4, 2010 5:45:09 GMT 10
Aw, I love that this is from Renya's POV. It lends an interesting perspective on events.
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Post by Lisa on Apr 4, 2010 6:48:59 GMT 10
Thank you!
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