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Post by jazzyjess on Mar 31, 2010 19:19:13 GMT 10
Title: 4. I Just Want To Cry In Front Of You Rating: PG Length: 110 Competitor: Raoul Round/Fight: Final Summary: I just want to cry in front of you.
Early one morning he woke to a strange sound. Were anyone else with him but her, he would have sworn it was choked back sobs. But she never cried. Even that first day, when he had held her and shared her silent grief, she hadn’t cried. So now, as he sat up to see her eyes red and her lips trembling along with the rest of her, he was shocked. For a moment. Then he pulled her onto his lap, holding her as he had the first day. And he whispered to her, though she might not want to speak. And it was all right, if she wanted to cry.
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domluvr
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Post by domluvr on Apr 15, 2010 11:25:11 GMT 10
I love this little series! These were all so heartbreaking, it is so evident that they have been through so much together, and now all they have left is each other. They both miss the way things once were, they have both changed so much, but Kel starts to open up in the end. It's amazing how you can show such emotion in so few words!
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