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Post by Cass on Mar 11, 2010 13:23:05 GMT 10
Title: She Left on Monday Rating: G Length: 138 Competitor: Dom Round/Fight: 2/B Summary: The news hits him like a fist to the gut.
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King Jonathan comes personally to deliver the news, even though it would have been better if it was Lord Raoul or one of her parents, someone he knows cares and someone who feels it as keenly as he does.
Dom supposes that it's the king's way of honoring her, even though it just makes everything a little bit worse.
The king intones how he's sorry, how she is a hero and will always be a hero, how she will be commemorated, how she has the respect of the Crown, how much she will be remembered for all of her great deeds, for all of her acts, how she will be remembered in ballads and tales of the first lady knights.
Dom interrupts him.
"I don't care," he says. "None of that matters. I just want my wife back."
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Post by wordy on Mar 11, 2010 13:29:36 GMT 10
Awww!
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Post by Sam-and-antha on Mar 11, 2010 14:29:44 GMT 10
Sad! oh but It was good, I like how he Interupts Jon..I would've too. I would've told him to go away.
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Post by jazzyjess on Mar 11, 2010 17:08:12 GMT 10
Aww My heart just goes out to Dom in stories like these!
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Post by queenscovegirl on Mar 11, 2010 19:17:57 GMT 10
So sad! Poor Dom
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Mar 12, 2010 7:57:07 GMT 10
Oh, poor Dom This piece is gorgeous...and I love the title, I wasn't expecting it to mean what it did.
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domluvr
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♥ Dom ♥
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Post by domluvr on Jul 15, 2010 14:12:02 GMT 10
Oh poor Dom! This is so pretty.
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Post by katieheidie on Jul 15, 2010 14:42:56 GMT 10
So sad, but so well written.
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