Bec
Queen's Rider
Most likely procrastinating
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Post by Bec on Mar 12, 2010 22:03:13 GMT 10
Title: The Experiment Rating: G Length: 128 words Competitor: Dom Round/Fight: 2/A Summary: Dom's conclusion
He hated the feeling he was experiencing, he hated not being in control and not knowing his own emotions. He watched her laughing with one of the men from his squad.
He had kissed girls before, or in Kel’s case the young woman she was becoming, but Kel radiated something special the last time they had kissed she had made him peculiarly breathless. He had always assured himself that Kel was just another of his experiments, but many of his other experiments where much prettier than Kel and somewhat dafter.
Turning she caught his eye, simultaneously she sent an arrow rocketing through the space between them landing cleanly in his heart. She smiled up at him and waved and that was the moment he realised, he loved her.
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Post by jazzyjess on Mar 13, 2010 5:26:35 GMT 10
Err... I certainly hope that was not a literal arrow!
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Bec
Queen's Rider
Most likely procrastinating
Posts: 692
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Post by Bec on Mar 13, 2010 7:53:30 GMT 10
I can assure you that our blue eyed sergeant is still alive and healthy!
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Mar 13, 2010 8:50:38 GMT 10
I really liked the ending! Good job
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domluvr
Squire
♥ Dom ♥
Posts: 1,471
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Post by domluvr on Jul 15, 2010 14:29:14 GMT 10
LOL Jess, an archery accident would put quite a damper on the mood... this is such a lovely fic; I love when player Dom falls in love!
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Post by katieheidie on Jul 15, 2010 14:47:08 GMT 10
Awe, so cute!
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