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Post by fantail on Apr 21, 2010 12:10:17 GMT 10
Title: Protecting the Protector 2 Rating: PG Length: 236 Summary: The number one rule for the boys: Never be late
He tapped his pen on the chair. He grinded his teeth. He tapped his foot. He hated old men who took forever to let the class out. And he hated even more, the idiot who pulled the prank that was keeping his whole class in late after the bell had gone. Dom had come to his classroom and looked in the door, only to have the grumpy, miserly old man growl at him. So Dom had gone ahead. Raoul had been very firm to all the boys: ALWAYS be on time to get Keladry from school. And they were told why. They knew that crazy necromancer was running around the country looking for her. He had told his teacher that he couldn’t stay behind, that he’d do his time at lunch that day. But no. So he sat there anxiously waiting for the culprit to confess . . .
Meanwhile Dom hurried along as fast as he could. He cursed silently these people who seemed to have all the time in the world to get where they were going. They just ambled along, and blocked his way. Finally he got a clear way and started to jog up the road to the primary school, where Kel would be waiting outside with Owen and Merric. He saw Merric. And he saw Owen. But he couldn’t see Kel. When Owen saw him he came rushing over yelling, “She’s not here! We can’t find her!”. And Dom felt his heart stop.
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Post by jazzyjess on Apr 21, 2010 12:15:02 GMT 10
This is so incredibly enticing! I can't wait to find out what will happen!
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domluvr
Squire
♥ Dom ♥
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Post by domluvr on Apr 21, 2010 14:06:53 GMT 10
And he hated even more, the idiot who pulled the prank that was keeping his whole class in late after the bell had gone. Was that Neal? I see that being Neal, haha. I LOVE this. I simply adore how protective Raoul is of her, and how Dom was responsible for picking her up. Can't wait to read more! (Please don't have little Kel dead )
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Apr 22, 2010 10:12:29 GMT 10
Um, yeah. Please don't kill Kel!
But I adore this. Modern Kel and Dom--squees! (even if they aren't together) Great writing, I can't wait to see what comes next!
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