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Post by kiz on Jan 12, 2010 16:42:10 GMT 10
Title: Smirks and Shivers Rating: PG Summary: Alex sees more than anybody suspects. Jon/Alan; vague hints at Alex/Roger
When he first saw Jon, half shadowed, brushing copper strands out Squire Alan’s eyes, Alex paid it no mind.
When he saw them months later, caught up in fervent whispers, he began to wonder.
And when he saw Jon tiptoe from his squire’s room, clad only in a night shirt and stockings, he knew. When he saw Jon fish his squire from that half frozen pond, concomitantly gentle and stern and protective, he knew.
He would keep their secret: He had secrets of his own, ones that made him smirk and shiver. Alex knew his secret was much, much better.
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Post by greenie on Jan 12, 2010 16:46:51 GMT 10
Ooh, this is a great secret to explore! Awesome job!
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Minuit
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Helping George out of the Closet
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Post by Minuit on Jan 12, 2010 17:00:32 GMT 10
Teehee, I like this, a lot. well done.
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Post by Verasque on Jan 12, 2010 17:11:47 GMT 10
Ugh, pure Alex mentality! It's fabulous the way he comes out on top in the end, and *his* secret seems more sinfully curious than ever. Awesome stuff
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Post by Katty on Jan 12, 2010 17:33:29 GMT 10
Great work! An excellent piece
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Post by wordy on Jan 12, 2010 17:50:47 GMT 10
This is written really well, great characterisation. And I love Alex
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Post by Lisa on Jan 12, 2010 23:13:48 GMT 10
Oh! Oooh! I adore how you've written this, with Alex still trying to be the best, even in the dangerous secrets they keep!! Most people in this situation would be glad to find someone to confide in, but he's still trying to one-up the world.
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