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Post by Verasque on May 10, 2010 20:26:07 GMT 10
Title: Paradox Rating: PG Prompt: #1 Feelings and emotions Category: 100 word Word Count: 100 Summary: A quiet moment between two heroes.
He subconsciously stroked the dipping line of her spine with his knuckle, his thoughts drifting far yet lingering to float in the air hesitantly. The smell of sweat and soap clung to the sheets, the cotton raspy against their skin; suffocating, luxurious.
She murmured in her sleep suddenly, his caress halting to a stop against its teasing across her hip. Liam tasted adventure and freedom, and a little bit of fear, yet she continued to dream, as bold and striking as the tawny red of her hair, but with the nobleness of her legend.
And her presence, tumultuous, calmed him.
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Post by greenie on May 10, 2010 20:46:30 GMT 10
Wow, this is fantastic! I love how it's so descriptive, but gives off such a calm and relaxed feeling. It's really wonderful.
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Post by Rosie on May 10, 2010 20:56:45 GMT 10
The conflicts in this are wonderfully characteristic of their relationship. I really love this piece, since I thought they made a great pairing in the books. Delightful!
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Post by PeroxidePirate on May 10, 2010 22:14:54 GMT 10
This is a lovely use of the prompt, and I like Liam as he is here.
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Post by journeycat on May 11, 2010 0:35:16 GMT 10
This is beautiful - Liam is so rarely involved in fanfiction, and I think you've portrayed his complex relationship with Alanna perfectly.
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Post by bebeschtroumph on May 11, 2010 8:13:48 GMT 10
This really was lovely. You managed to choose all the right words in exactly the right places to really make it come alive.Loved it!
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Post by Verasque on May 16, 2010 0:44:28 GMT 10
Thanks guys! Glad you all liked it.
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Post by mistrali on Dec 18, 2012 22:12:14 GMT 10
That last line is excellent!
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