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Post by emberrose on May 31, 2010 11:18:43 GMT 10
Title: Toreador Rating: PG Prompt: Feeling and Emotions Category: 100 Words Word Count: 100 Summary: George is out of the country and Raoul and Gary aren't enough to calm a raging Alanna.
It seemed as though all Corus was holding its breath—all but one man holding out his hand expectantly, his only sign of discomfort being the thin line of his lips. A famed explosion from the Lioness was—if only temporarily—put off by a polite—if shocking—request to dance from the man Neal had cleverly dubbed “The Stump.” With a small shove from Gary, she accepted his hand and joined him on the vacant dance floor. Raoul watched for a moment before turning to Gary, “Who’s leading who?” Gary shrugged, only hoping it ended better than last time.
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Post by max on May 31, 2010 11:48:56 GMT 10
Lol. I liked this
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Post by greenie on May 31, 2010 12:22:18 GMT 10
Hee, this is great! I can just imagine everyone being completely gobsmacked. ;D I think my favourite part is the title.
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Post by emberrose on Jun 2, 2010 7:29:06 GMT 10
Thanks
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Jun 4, 2010 3:49:48 GMT 10
The last line makes me wonder what happened before Very funny, good job!
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Post by jazzyjess on Jun 4, 2010 11:05:34 GMT 10
Rafi! Have missed you around here!
Wonderful job. I like the way you've cast Wyldon as the peacemaker, and I love how well he knows Alanna, that he is so able to make her speechless! I smell a new ship coming on...
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Post by emberrose on Jun 8, 2010 7:48:32 GMT 10
Rowena- I imagine it was very bad... @jess- I've been running around in circles a lot lately, but I should be regular again in a week or so
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Post by Verasque on Aug 18, 2010 18:58:10 GMT 10
Oh gosh. I was so not expecting that. Which makes it all that much more marvelous! Love this.
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