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Post by clairshadows on May 20, 2009 0:18:57 GMT 10
Title: Convent Rating: G Prompt: Switch Category: Under 100 words Word count: 48 Summery: Some decisions shouldn’t be changed.
Alanna shook her head. “I can’t disgrace our family like this. I’m to go the convent and that’s where I’ll go.”She bit her lower lip and held her brother’s eyes determined not to let him see how much this hurt. She knew her duty and she would obey.
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anilaurel
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Post by anilaurel on May 20, 2009 0:26:13 GMT 10
Oooh, the Alanna-goes-to-the-convent. Classic, this was great.
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Post by clairshadows on May 20, 2009 8:16:48 GMT 10
Thankyou
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Post by Lisa on May 20, 2009 8:22:51 GMT 10
Ooh, I like how the switch isn't Alanna's stubborness, but how she uses it. Nicely done!
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Post by clairshadows on May 20, 2009 18:55:51 GMT 10
Thankyou
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Pandesme
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Post by Pandesme on Feb 3, 2011 6:15:18 GMT 10
Very interesting
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