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Post by PeroxidePirate on May 2, 2009 10:06:28 GMT 10
Title: Succession Rating: PG Prompt: Switch Category: 100-word Word Count: 100 Summary: The line of succession is always tangled.
He should have been the crown prince.
He was the one the people adored. He had the intelligence, the education, the manners, and the looks. He should have been next in line for the throne. With the old king dead, he should be the one awaiting his coronation.
Well, soon enough he would be. They had a plan, and she would play her part. Truly, he was her king already. She loved him. She would do anything to help him.
Alanna smiled. So what if Jonathan was a second son? His brother Roger wouldn't stand in the way for long.
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Post by Katty on May 2, 2009 11:08:56 GMT 10
*flailyflail* Guh. Love you. So much. This is AWESOME
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Post by heatherneather on May 2, 2009 11:12:39 GMT 10
I agree with Katty-- this is AWESOME.
It so perfectly catches that dark!Alanna voice that I love so much.
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Post by ubiquitous on May 4, 2009 20:04:19 GMT 10
This is way awesome!!
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Lass
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Post by Lass on May 5, 2009 5:58:20 GMT 10
Haha! Just right switch.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on May 5, 2009 13:30:25 GMT 10
*grins* I kinda thought this would go over well... 'twas an idea in the back of my brain, but it took the "switch" prompt for me to realize a drabble is all I needed to get the point across. Thanks for commenting, all!
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Post by Imogen on May 6, 2009 10:06:41 GMT 10
Fratricide, excellent! It's so much more traditional that way.
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Post by Fenella on May 6, 2009 11:27:08 GMT 10
Ahaha! I feel so much concern for Roger right now.
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Post by Lisa on May 17, 2009 14:57:12 GMT 10
Very interesting switch!! ^__^
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Post by girlcalledsun on Jun 3, 2009 6:25:16 GMT 10
Evil!Alanna! This is great - and I feel worried for Jon as well as Roger.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Jun 9, 2009 6:39:10 GMT 10
Thanks!
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Post by Seek on Jun 9, 2009 19:04:31 GMT 10
Uh-oh...*dramatic music* Evil!Alanna is here...beware, Roger! xD
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Post by Pandesme on Feb 3, 2011 6:46:01 GMT 10
LOL, EVIL Alanna and Jon, love it!! Total win!
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