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Post by Seek on May 25, 2009 20:18:21 GMT 10
Title: Hatred in Love Rating: PG-13 Prompt: #3, Villain Category: Up to 250 words Word count: 250 words Summary: He hates her, because she is beautiful to him. (also posted to FFN; www.fanfiction.net/s/5089314/3/Collection_of_Snippets)He hates her, because she is beautiful to him. And he hates himself because he desires her. He is harsh to her, tries to break her, so she will submit to him. But yet he loves her for this unfettered fire. She is beautiful, lingering ever still in his mind like the whisper of a sweet, soft, tender dream. She weighs on his mind like his duty, only that she is just there…silent, present, ephemerally beautiful. She has all of its appeal and none of its harshness. He wants her, and wants her for his own.He loves her and wants her and for that he hates himself and hates her. He doesn’t want to see that beauty despoiled by the harsh life of a warrior and tries to drive her away. He doesn’t think to kneel before her and beg; his pride will not allow that. She is beautiful to him; short brown hair, dreamy hazel eyes, stubborn mouth. She is beautiful to him, and he woos her with harsh insults and hatred because now his love and his hatred are so deeply entwined within him that he cannot think to separate them. In one moment of his life, she has reached and touched him so deeply and she will never ever know that. Joren hates Keladry, because she is beautiful to him. And he knows she will be his destruction; she already is, and his life will never be the same again. And for that, he hates her.
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Post by ubiquitous on May 25, 2009 20:55:38 GMT 10
Omg!! *is dead from squee* I didn't think it could get better after the Emelan fic, but *flail* I love, love, love Kel/Joren, and you've done this so wonderfully!!! ♥ (Just one small thing on a modly note: we don't actually have a T rating for fic/art, so this would fall under PG-13. I've changed it for you this time though )
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Post by Seek on May 25, 2009 22:03:37 GMT 10
Thankee xD
Sorry, because I worked this for FFN format and I must have forgotten to change the rating. I won't do that again (I hope) >.<
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Post by ubiquitous on May 25, 2009 22:15:22 GMT 10
That's cool. I do the reverse, and I often have to edit the ff.net file a bunch of times to get it right.
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Minuit
Knight
Helping George out of the Closet
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Post by Minuit on May 25, 2009 22:59:24 GMT 10
*squeee* sigh. I love this. I'm not a Kel/Joren fanatic like Isha, but I just adore love/hate relationships. This is wonderful.
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allymarty
Rider Trainee
I also answer to Allie.
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Post by allymarty on May 26, 2009 3:09:41 GMT 10
I love this! Like Isha, I'm a major K/J shipper and I think you captured the essence of their relationship in its purest form - at least from Joren's POV. Wonderful work!!
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Post by Seek on May 26, 2009 3:40:54 GMT 10
Thanks guys
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Post by Lisa on Jun 10, 2009 13:02:28 GMT 10
Oh, this is fantastic. It's hard to find K/J that's in-character, and this one is perfect. ;D
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Post by Katty on Jun 29, 2009 11:25:44 GMT 10
great work
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Post by kaossparrow on Jul 20, 2009 3:52:36 GMT 10
I'm not a huge fan of Kel/Joren, nut you make it work. REALLLY REALLY WELL. ;D
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