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Post by Rachy on May 20, 2009 18:52:52 GMT 10
Title: Knights & Empresses Rating: G Prompt: Switch Category: 100 Words Word Count: 100 words Summary: GDT Entry. Kally and Kel meet.
Kalasin and Keladry meet at King’s Reach. One is training to be a lady, the other to be a lady knight.
Their futures have already flipped and intertwined.
One is taken to Carthak to be married, the other sent as one of the guards for the wedding guests. The Lady Knight looks at the Empress, and the Empress looks back, neither regreting their decisions.
It is a quiet acknowledgement full of what could have been.
They renew their acquaintance with an introduction.
“Lady Knight Kalasin Of Conte, Princess of Tortall, the new Imperial Majesty, Empress Keladry Iliniat of Mindelan and Carthak.”
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Post by clairshadows on May 20, 2009 18:57:43 GMT 10
Ooohh this is fun
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Post by Rachy on May 20, 2009 19:01:25 GMT 10
Thanks I planned on writing a Kally becoming a knight, but it got too long so it's a fic in the works. Then a lightbulb flashed and I thought... Kel as Empress?
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Post by ubiquitous on May 20, 2009 23:38:41 GMT 10
Ooh, interesting! Very nicely done!!
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Post by incarnadine on Jun 2, 2009 19:44:58 GMT 10
I didn't get the switch... did you mean, Kel would be the Empress?
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Post by Lisa on Jun 10, 2009 13:13:43 GMT 10
Expand! Expand!! This one feels like a teaser for a gigantic saga of awesome proportions! ;D
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Post by Rachy on Jun 10, 2009 17:45:15 GMT 10
Clarifying: Thanks. I probably will expand, but not for a while as school is busy. incarnadine: Kel is the Empress, Kally the first Lady Knight so it was a direct swap.
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Post by Imogen on Jun 13, 2009 11:38:36 GMT 10
Good job! I didn't see your twist coming till the last line. There should be more Kally, Lady Knight fic, I think. And it's interesting to think of them being friends.
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Post by Katty on Jul 19, 2009 13:10:27 GMT 10
Ohhh, interesting switch!
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Post by zbilja on Jul 19, 2009 21:42:12 GMT 10
Wow! You have some absolutely brilliant ideas! One thing I want to get straight, though - was Kel a knight, and Kally an Empress at the beginning, or had they swapped even before then (or is that spoiling too much?) Again, some great work from a great writer! Keep it up.
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