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Post by ubiquitous on May 4, 2009 20:01:14 GMT 10
Title: Dark Rating: PG-13 Prompt: Villian Category: 100 words Word count: 100 words Summary: Imajane loses her light.
She stares out at the night sky from the marble balcony. There is no moon tonight, and even the stars are dimmer through the haze of cloud. The darkness is little comfort, mirroring her emptiness. A tear falls from her eyes as her lids close, too lost in her pain to even cry out as her heart slowly turns to ice. The cold wind pummels her, but she barely notices as she clutches the letter in her hand, the corners of the parchment flapping against her arm.
Imajane curses the Gods, the Tortallans, and Burchard.
Her only son is dead.
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Minuit
Knight
Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on May 4, 2009 22:23:56 GMT 10
Oooh, I love it. So much emotion. Lovely.
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Post by ubiquitous on May 4, 2009 23:24:02 GMT 10
Thank you!
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Post by kaossparrow on May 5, 2009 7:57:31 GMT 10
I'm sorry, I don't remember who Burchard is, so... who is the son supposed to be?
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Post by ubiquitous on May 5, 2009 9:25:15 GMT 10
Joren.
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anilaurel
Queen's Rider
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Post by anilaurel on May 5, 2009 10:10:42 GMT 10
Ooooh the scandal. This was really good.
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Post by ubiquitous on May 5, 2009 10:33:28 GMT 10
Thank you!
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Post by Katty on May 5, 2009 13:14:52 GMT 10
This is lovely! Nice twist
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Post by kaossparrow on May 6, 2009 6:45:59 GMT 10
Oh. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Fenella on May 6, 2009 11:11:17 GMT 10
Awww, I'm really feeling the love today for the pages and squires who didn't make it.
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Post by ubiquitous on May 6, 2009 23:40:33 GMT 10
Thank you!! @ Fen - Yes, those poor pages. And I'm seeing so much more Joren!fic I can't help but be happy. ^.^
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Post by Lisa on May 18, 2009 1:21:35 GMT 10
Dude! That was SUCH an unpredictable twist, and so very weighted, since now all that Copper Isles crazy can be attritbuted to him!
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Post by ubiquitous on May 22, 2009 17:12:31 GMT 10
Thank you!
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Post by heatherneather on Jun 1, 2009 12:01:48 GMT 10
Cool idea-- I love this for many reasons: 1) Joren has (had?) the crazy Copper Isles blood in his veins. 2) We see Imajane transform into the icy person that we know her as. 3) Copper Isles/Tortallan hatred expansion.
Yay for deep fics!!!
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Post by ubiquitous on Jun 2, 2009 9:00:07 GMT 10
Thank you!
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allymarty
Rider Trainee
I also answer to Allie.
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Post by allymarty on Jun 3, 2009 7:15:45 GMT 10
You know I love Joren, too, so I thought this was great. What a marvelous twist you've put on the whole 'why does Joren hate Kel so much?' question. Loved it!
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Post by ubiquitous on Jun 3, 2009 10:24:42 GMT 10
Thank you!!
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Post by zbilja on Jul 19, 2009 22:05:46 GMT 10
A brilliant idea with a genius ending! (Yes, I really think your ending is that great. : )
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Post by ubiquitous on Jul 20, 2009 20:17:29 GMT 10
Thank you!! *blushes*
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