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Post by opalgirl on Sept 22, 2009 13:54:30 GMT 10
Title: An Understanding of Sorts. Rating: G Word Count: 51 Summary: Alanna and Nawat reach a bit of an understanding (of each other), caused by the children. Notes: Was originally a longer fic of sorts, but since Nawat has little personality in my opinion and the triplets none at all in canon, I couldn't make it work.
Alanna can't help but laugh when little Ochobai tugs impatiently at the leg of her grandda's breeches, wanting her turn to sit on his shoulders; her son-in-law is laughing at his daughter's antics too, and they seem to come to an understanding in that instant: her first grandchildren are his children.
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 22, 2009 14:42:03 GMT 10
Aww. So cute!!
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Post by renegade on Sept 22, 2009 15:01:07 GMT 10
Aw, that's sweet - I really like the way you've worked this!
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Post by Minuit on Sept 22, 2009 15:53:15 GMT 10
This is sweet. Although having the lioness for a grandmother may be a bit scary
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Post by opalgirl on Sept 22, 2009 15:56:40 GMT 10
I know, guys, isn't it cute? Thank you! And, Minuit: Nah. Alanna as a grandmother isn't scary, it's Alanna as a mother-in-law you need to worry about.
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Post by Verasque on Sept 22, 2009 17:20:06 GMT 10
This is interesting; the sudden simplicity of the understanding between them is amusing
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Post by Seek on Sept 22, 2009 19:59:46 GMT 10
I really like the transcendent way this focuses on a moment and from that moment, to a shared point of silent, universal understanding. Well done!
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Post by queenscovegirl on Sept 27, 2009 8:10:08 GMT 10
Very sweet! Now that I think about it...I don't believe I've ever read a ficcy that had both Alanna and Nawat in it... *looks thoughtful* Anyways good job!
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Post by opalgirl on Sept 27, 2009 12:35:54 GMT 10
Thanks, guys.
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