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Post by Lisa on Sept 24, 2009 2:45:24 GMT 10
Title: Reservations Rating: PG-13 Word Count: 49 Summary: The spark Kel felt when she met Dom went both ways.
When he sees her, he wants her - wants to see those long lashes closed as he kisses her, wants to know what a strong body feels like under his, wants to touch her in ways he knows she's never been touched before - but then he remembers that she's fourteen.
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Post by Rosie on Sept 24, 2009 3:12:11 GMT 10
Oh, oh, I love this!! And you said this style didn't suit you - you are so incredibly wrong. I do have a soft spot for the Kel/Dom relationship, especially like this.
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Post by theantichris on Sept 24, 2009 9:38:03 GMT 10
YES. I've never thought of that before, but YES. Awesome sentence.
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Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on Sept 24, 2009 9:38:54 GMT 10
awww, *squeee* Kel/Dom. This is really great!
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Post by journeycat on Sept 24, 2009 9:44:01 GMT 10
Do itttt Dom. We won't judge you.
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 24, 2009 9:45:10 GMT 10
Oh, I just love this!! Way awesome! ♥
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Post by Lisa on Sept 26, 2009 2:34:30 GMT 10
Thank you! ^__^ And Rosie... you also loved Kel/Dom as friends-with-benefits. I love that you love them the same way I do - as sex-partners rather than emotional-partners.
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Post by Cass on Sept 26, 2009 2:44:09 GMT 10
Ooh, this is great! The last bit is the kicker.
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Post by Rachy on Sept 26, 2009 20:43:54 GMT 10
Yay for Kel/Dom love This is brilliant. Brilliant sentence, and brilliant portrayal of the KD relationship. ;D
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Post by Lisa on Sept 27, 2009 2:22:39 GMT 10
Thank you, thank you!!
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Post by queenscovegirl on Sept 27, 2009 10:38:39 GMT 10
*Squeeeeeeee!!!!!* Amazing! (Just go ahead Dom, we won't tell anyone!!)
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Post by Verasque on Sept 27, 2009 13:22:09 GMT 10
So forbidden, yet enticing! It's just, gah, *flails* Can't believe I nearly missed this.
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Post by Lisa on Sept 27, 2009 13:28:24 GMT 10
queenscovegirl - aw, Dom can be patient... just a few more years and he won't feel bad at all about the age gap. @joa - *flails* I'm glad you found it, too! XD Thanks!!
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renegade
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Roger > Wyldon (TAKE THAT LISA)
look out, Jess was about
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Post by renegade on Sept 27, 2009 16:26:09 GMT 10
Oh, brilliant! I love that last little bit on the end - it almost made me laugh for some reason (it's either the sandwich fics stealing my sanity or I need to sleep a bit more )
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